Wednesday, February 4, 2009
The Pathos, Ethos, and Logos of Fieldstone
The barn, Fieldstone, makes many different arguments. I believe that the barns strongest Pathos argument is that it appeals to those who love horses. No one is out there, except for when we have one of our games, that isn’t deeply moved by horses and cares about them very much. Another Pathos argument that the people who work at Fieldstone make is their relationship with their boarders and with us. When they go out of their way to be nice to those who pay to stable with them I believe that they are appealing to our emotions in attempt to make us continue to stay there. Fieldstone also makes many Ethos arguments, the first being that riding horses takes place there. Many do not believe that horses should be ridden like we ride them or ridden in general. By allowing this to happen on their facilities, they are displaying that they condone this behavior. Another argument, which is not as accepted, is their treatment of the horses. By letting some of the horses get turned out in dangerous pastures, not turning the hot wire on to contain them, and by not feeding adequately, they seem to be making ethical argument of apathy. This does not appeal to any of the team members and actually often upsets us. The final argument, logos, is pretty straight forward. Obviously the owner has many acres of land and a large barn with stalls, so it would therefore make sense for her to rent out those stalls to those who would like to stay there. With this, comes the hiring of stable hands to take care of the horses and the establishment. Also, because she has two rings to ride in, the space makes the argument that it would be practical for people to ride there and pay money to be taught lessons. Of course the barn makes many other arguments that I will continue to find with more research.
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Tassie,
ReplyDeleteFieldstone sounds like a wonderful place! I have family members out in Decatur, TX that have ranches and some out in west texas (Sweetwater, TX), and it is so much fun going out there to visit! Being a city kid, I do not spend much time out in these barn areas with animals, although I absolutely love animals. When i AM out there, I feel so relaxed and at peace. I think you chose a great place and you definitely did a great job explain ethos, pathos, and logos. I think I enjoyed your pathos explanation the best because I could vision the barn and how it made you feel to be there with the animals you love!
Good luck on the rest of the portfolio Tassie!
-Nick
I like how you addressed downsides to the arguments of this place. Many don't focus or recognize these. Positive appeals are obvious, but negative appeals are normally subtler, and you obviously have some experience riding, so it is interesting to see your assessment of things that others wouldn't realize.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you payed attention to the main part of a barn, the horses. Many people don't care to pay attention to the horses because you just assume that since they have a place to stay that they're fine and happy. I really like how mix both the positive and the negative aspects of the barn. I like your ideas and I wish you the best of luck on your unit 1 paper!
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